Thursday, May 19, 2011

Should Abortion be an Option?

Raul Martinez
                                                                                                                                                                       
Mrs.Boresen

Period 4

May 13, 2011

Final Essay
Should Abortion be an Option?
Abortion in the United States has been legal in every state since the Supreme Court decision on January 22, 1973, but there is still much debate on whether or not it should be an option. Is there a sufficient impact on humanity to support the illegalization of abortion? After researching the statistical data, I am pro-choice on the subject, meaning that abortion should remain a legal option. Human birth is an experience that should take place under the right circumstances. Granted there is no correct way of raising a child, nor are there eligibility rules here in the United States for who may give birth, but there is the option for choosing whether or not one will go through with the birth of their expected baby. I am in support of allowing the expecting mother to choose if she would like to go through with the birth of the expected baby.

Besides getting into the legal aspect of the argument, there is a great deal of reasons why this option should remain open. Taking the same position as Brian Elroy McKinley on the matter, I can support the claims. Nearly all abortions take place in the first trimester, when a fetus cannot exist independent of the mother. It is a dependent of another life form and has not begun its own life. Abortion is a safe medical procedure. Eighty-eight percent of those who do have an abortion have it done in their first trimester. This does not physically affect a woman's health or future ability to become pregnant or give birth. In cases of rape, a woman may be uncomfortable of the realization of this terrible act, or is unaware she is pregnant. In the case of not knowing, the morning after pill is ineffective. Teenagers who become mothers have grim prospects for the future. They are much more likely to leave of school; rely on public assistance to raise a child; and develop health problems. It is good that abortion is an option because a baby is a huge responsibility that affects more than its own life.
The website abortionfacts.com holds the arguments against abortion are on the subjects of immediate and eventual medical effect, psychological effects, and effects on future children. Of the psychological reactions reported after abortion it was reported that women who had an abortion as a teen were significantly more likely to report: nightmares; flashbacks to the abortion; hysterical outbreaks; unforgiveness of those involved; feelings of guilt; fear of punishment from God; excessive interest in pregnant women; excessive interest in babies; a dramatic personality change for the worse; a waking or sleeping "visitation" from the aborted child; having talked to the aborted child prior to the abortion. To this side of the argument I can consider that a person’s well-being is a huge part of their life, but these are emotions. Feelings change, memories fade, and people come in and out of one another’s life. A human born unto a mother is going to stay that person’s son or daughter for the rest of their life. The central theme of birth is not bad, it is when the mother is a teenager, or has been raped, or any other unfortunate example you can think of, when following through with the birth is not the best option.
Abortion is not a good thing overall. I say that because it had to come from somewhere where a man or woman did not love each other, or it was caused by an act of rape. I certainly hope that no one would ever need an abortion. The simple idea here is that it is important for it to be an option for the sake of progress. Whether it’s progress in the expected mother’s life, or on a larger scale of progression of American women as a whole, the point is that it provides a way to set up to do things right the next time.

Friday, May 6, 2011

The Cast of The Secret

Raul Martinez
Mrs.Boreson
Period 4
May 6, 2011
Option 2
The Cast of The Secret
The creator of The Secret found again and again that the knowledge of one principle had been applied throughout the lives of significant men and women throughout history. The Secret and those in the film possess a knowledge that is so simple, yet for many, the story is nearly impossible to comprehend. No person's story in this film is better than another's. These people have reached their highest level of success, and have done so either through the secret, or unconsciously throughout their life and have now given it the title of THE SECRET.
To say that one of the featured person’s testimony is more significant than another’s would be invalid. The reason behind this is because The Secret is based on the universe having an abundant amount of resources for us to use at our disposal, so that we may go on living a richer lifestyle. Well, not everyone is chasing the same resource, which is to say that each person in this film specifically wanted something different, and obtained it.
“Pursuing money to the exclusion of everything else does not bring lasting happiness. I thought money alone would do it for me. But none of the money I earned brought me deep satisfaction and self-worth. Fortunately I acquired self-respect and integrity by working honestly, but I also began to realize that my personal definition of true success included much more than just acquisition of money”, John Assaraf. John Assaraf is in the hit film “The Secret”, where he shares his enlivening words to address the unknown capabilities that the viewer holds. He is the perfect example of rags to riches by following a certain mindset.
He was forced to grow up quick due to financial problems at home and began working at the age of eight. At nineteen he decided to the real estate business was a realistic area in which he could prosper. By mimicking the styles of successful real estate agent Alan Brown, he was able to develop life and business skills whose effects would immediately be seen. He made a hefty thirty thousand dollars in real estate his first year. At age twenty he was living his dream making $150,000 in real estate. (John Assaraf). In 1982 he took a break from the real estate success he had built in search of something that he could apply to all areas of his life. Traveling the world for two years, he learned of different cultures and beliefs, but more importantly the similarities in those who are rich in their respectable setting. You will see in the film that he is glowing with excitement to share his knowledge with you, for the sole reason that he knows it works.
After that trip around the world John Assaraf was able to create a multi-billion dollar real estate company. In 1999 he began an internet start-up in which users could experience online tours. Just six years later he co-founded ‘One-Coach’, a company that trains and consults individuals to becoming successful entrepreneurs.(John Assaraf).  He did this with his friend of twenty-five years Murray Smith, and together they generated $7million in the first year (John Assaraf). He is now a certified Life-Coach and globally recognized speaker. John has appeared on television shows such as Larry King Live, Ellen, and Anderson Cooper 360. His story directly ties in with “The Secret” as living proof of its teachings.
Dr. John Demartini faced physical and mental challenges in the first years of his life. He is featured in “The Secret” as a successful overcomer of obstacles and as a philosopher. His hardships that he faced earlier in life acted as a slingshot to passion for education.
 At age seventeen, Dr.Demartini made a life-changing decision of dedicating his life to understanding the capabilities of humans. With focus and determined effort, he attained entry level into Wharton Junior College.  He then progressed to the University of Houston where he completed his Bachelors of Science degree in 1978. He went on to study Chiropractic at the Texas Chiropractic College where he graduated with honors - Magna Cum Laude in 1982. (Dr.Demartini)When looking at John’s academic accomplishments it is impressive that he would go through these different practices. Until we understand his hardships that he faced at a young age, we cannot give justice to what he really has done for himself.  He proclaims, "When you believe you cannot read or learn and you then discover that you can, it awakens an insatiable appetite for knowledge." From birth, Dr. Demartini wore hand and leg braces to correct a birth defect.(Dr.Demartini) At the age of fourteen he dropped out of school. In school he had difficulties that would later go on to be diagnosed as dyslexia and a speech impediment. In school he had difficulty reading, writing and speaking which was later diagnosed as dyslexia and a speech impediment. At age fourteen, Dr. Demartini dropped out of school, headed for Hawaii, and became a surfer. At 17 he almost died of strychnine poisoning. Strychnine is a poison that can cause serious health effects, including death.  This is where his life began to change greatly, and lead him to where he is today.
The similarity between Dr. John Demartini and John Assaraf goes deeper than the fact that they became travelers in search of a deeper understanding of themselves. They transformed their life using The Secret and by believing in themselves. Dr. John Demartini will speak in the film in a manner of ‘it’s so simple, anyone can do it’.
The only Feng Shui Master in the film is a woman named Marie Diamond. She has been filmed in other inspiring documentaries as well, where she helps people transform their lives from negative to positive. To say she is highly educated would be an understatement. Marie has provided tips to fortune 500 companies, and it is undeniable her methods work.
Marie Diamond is an author, lecturer, teacher, and a leader in the transformational movement. A native of Belgium, Marie trained there as a lawyer and criminologist. Fluent in five languages, she worked in government, publishing, and sales early in her career. Her safety management skills are sought by multinational corporations like BP-Amoco, Exxon-Mobil, and Total Fina, whose productivity and safety records improved dramatically after implementing her recommendations.
When you see Marie in the story, and this applies as well with all of the other people, you will see she is just an everyday human being. One of the main focuses is that as ‘average, everyday’ human beings, we all have this law of attraction within ourselves and it operates the same for everyone. Her accomplishments include being an author, lecturer, teacher, and a leader in the transformational movement.(Marie Diamond) she is impressively fluent in five languages, which leads many to believe had a deep impact during her years working for the government. Her safety management skills are sought by multinational corporations like BP-Amoco, Exxon-Mobil, and Total Fina, whose productivity and safety records improved dramatically after implementing her recommendations.(Marie Diamond) What sets her apart from the others featured in this film is that she is a Feng Shui Master. This is an ancient art and science developed over 3,000 years ago in China. It is a complex body of knowledge that reveals how to balance the energies of any given space to assure the health and good fortune for people inhabiting it. (Feng Shui) We begin to see that if people all across the world are using the same theme for reaching happiness and fulfillment for their lives, with the exception of giving it different names, then our conclusion is that it must work. She has seen both titles of this power that is rarely put to use, but is realistically obtainable for all.
Those who are featured in this film are sharing their stories, and have been carefully selected by creator Rhonda Byrne. Each of these three people are living proof of what choosing to live The Secret can do for you. You will see that they keep the focus on what the viewer can do, and much less on what they have done. These people will reveal The Secret in this film and a viewer can either take it or leave it.







Bibliography
1.      Kovacevich, Patty. "John Assaraf Having It All." Majestic Living Magazine: 32-37. 30 Mar. 2008. Web. 5 May 2011. <http://www.johnassaraf.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/11/JohnAssaraf_MajesticLiving.pdf>.

2.      "Profile." Demartini Homepage. DEMARTINI INSTITUTE. Web. 06 May 2011. <http://www.drdemartini.com/dr_demartini/profile#content_top>.

3.      "Meet Marie Diamond." Marie Diamond. MarieDiamond.com. Web. 06 May 2011. <http://www.mariediamond.com/meetmarie.htm>.

4.      Tchi, Rodika. "What Is Feng Shui - Feng Shui History and Theory - Feng Shui Tips." Feng Shui Tips - How To Apply Feng Shui - Bedroom Tips, Colors, Home, Office & Garden Feng Shui. Web. 06 May 2011. http://fengshui.about.com/od/thebasics/qt/fengshui.htm.

Thursday, April 21, 2011

Cover Letter

Raul Martinez                        
937 N 7th St.   
Johnstown, CO 80534           



April 19, 2011


Supervisor
Carino’s Italian
2473 West 28th St.
Greeley, CO 80634
To whom it may concern,
I would like to apply for the dish washers’ position at your restaurant. As my senior year comes to an end I need a summer job to help pay for college. I will be attending the University of Colorado-Boulder this fall, and can use all the financial assistance I can get. Prior experience in this job area makes me a perfect fit for your restaurant.
I am experienced working in the food business as a dishwasher, but this also included making food during times of upsurge to keep up with demand. Thirteen months of working with sanitizing dishes makes me an eligible person to work at your restaurant.
As you can see from my resume, I have perfect attendance in school two semesters so far in my high school career and plan on two more for my senior year. Participation in basketball, football, track, weightlifting and math tutoring show my involvement in doing a little extra and not just the minimum.
Carino’s has always been a great restaurant experience every time I have visited. I understand that working here revolves around great food, enthusiasm for work, and having fun while doing it all. I would like to discuss this position with you in detail. To arrange an interview, please contact me at the above address, email at rauleezy22@gmail.com or call (970)-691-5679.
Sincerely,
Raul Martinez

Monday, April 4, 2011

Three Scholarship Essays

In section 'Evidence of Writing'

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What was the Finished Definition Essay

Raul Martinez
Mrs. Boreson
Expository Writing, Period 4
Definition Essay
March 23, 2011
When one is given an opportunity to choose a word that they believe is significant in their life, it is important to find the word that has brought one’s self to where they currently are in life. “Diligent” is the word that I can relate the most to myself. It is through choosing this word that empowers the central feeling of being the word itself. The application of diligence to my life has opened windows of opportunity to move on to greater challenges. Many people may not understand what being diligent is, and may not do it all the time, but at some point in everyone’s life they experience it.
The online dictionary defines diligent as 1. Constant in effort to accomplish something; attentive and persistent in doing anything. 2. Done or pursued with persevering attention (Dictionary.com). This definition agrees to the way that I understand the word. Diligence can be broken down into two parts that will show how this one word is the product of different skills and characteristics. For a person to be diligent, they will first need to already be trying to accomplish something. This shows that they are adding value to their life by challenging themselves. Accomplishing something must be governed by rules, and this means the way to be diligent is to attempt to accomplish something carefully. It is not enough to try to accomplish, but rather to put regulations during the process, to make sure that the reward (of whatever it is a person is trying to accomplish) is of true satisfaction. The origin of the word
begins in the mid 14th century in France where it began as “attention, care". From there it moved on to "value highly, love, choose"
(Dictionary.com). The history and transformation of this word hold on to the theme of attention, and that is the central idea of diligence.
When it comes to characteristics of people, being a diligent worker cannot be completely understood when taught by someone else. It is one of those rare traits that can only be taught by from within after realizing that this is the way society wants people to be. Having a sense of pride from the effort one puts into their work will keep them addicted to being at a certain standard in any work they do. From my experiences, there is no bigger pay off than to be rewarded for the carefully chosen work I’ve put in. Whether it is on school assignments, or general house labor, paying attention and being persistent will lead to success.
Other words that fall in the same category are industrious, assiduous, sedulous, indefatigable, untiring, tireless, and unremitting. These all contain the central idea of working towards something with a will from within. The complete opposites of being diligent are inactive, indifferent, languid, lazy, lethargic, and negligent. No one should want to be categorized as any of these because they are not positive, and will not help a person get far in life. Seeing the opposite of what the word means will show what not to be, and for some, that is an easier way to comprehend why being diligent is appreciated. I have never been forced by another person to be diligent. My parents have explained that nice lifestyle they have provided for me is just temporary, and I will have to recreate this for myself through the effort I put in.  Basically what has happened is that viewing the rewards that I can achieve when I am older is a motivation to do the best work possible now.
“The hand of the diligent will rule, while the lazy will be put to forced labor.”-Author Unknown (Columbia World of Quotations). This quote has an easy concept to understand; no one should stop trying to accomplish the challenges put before them, and they will someday be the creator of those challenges for others to work towards. The word may also be applied, as well as the quote, to the way one has to be in school. At first, one will spend a lot of time working all the way from elementary school to college. After combining all of the education they have gathered, they will get to choose what they want to do in life, rather than be forced to live a life you they don’t want due to a lack of education. 
This word applies so well to my life, that it even describes the way I will have to work in my future career. My plan is to become an architect in life, and this requires a lot of skills combined. In fact, I believe it takes up all of the skills I have learned in life, and uses them to create unique works of large-scale art. Paying attention to detail is necessary to become successful in a project. In the career, one must consider numerous things at the same time and keep moving forward to meet deadlines. New challenges are brought up constantly, and each one of those challenges adds up to create the final product. This is property for residential, commercial, and industrial property owners.     
It is vital to be diligent in order to surpass the average, and go for advanced. I’ve found throughout my life that people usually appreciate diligent workers. Getting recognition for diligence is not nearly as important as staying at a level where everything you do is diligent work.  I have found it necessary to apply this word to my life because it has helped me in my past, and will be the reason for the success of my future. Anyone can become a diligent person by constantly staying at a standard of concentration with the work that they are doing. This is an import, yet rare, quality to have, and it can be the difference between ‘good’, and ‘great’.













BIBLIOGRAPHY

1. "Diligent | Define Diligent at Dictionary.com." Dictionary.com | Free Online Dictionary for English Definitions. Random House, Inc. 2011. Web. 04 Mar. 2011. <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/diligent>.
2. "The_hand_of_the_diligent_will_rule_while." Columbia World of Quotations. Columbia University Press, 1996. 03 Mar. 2011. <Dictionary.com http://quotes.dictionary.com/The_hand_of_the_diligent_will_rule_while >.

Thursday, March 24, 2011

Final Definition Essay

Raul Martinez
Mrs.Boreson
Expository Writing, Period 4
Definition Essay
March 4, 2011
         When one is given the opportunity to describe themself with one word it is important that they find the word that has brought them the most success  in life. “Diligent” is the word that I can relate the most to myself. It is a quality favored by those who rely on a person to accomlish any given task. It is the difference between a 'good' job, and 'great' work. At some point in a person's life they may get a taste of what diligent work is. However, the ability to practice this skill everyday is what makes peers, teachers, supervisor, and any spectators most impressed.
        The online dictionary defines diligent as 1. constant in effort to accomplish something; attentive and persistent in doing anything. 2. Done or pursued with persevering attention (Dictionary.com). This definition agrees to the way that I understand the word. Diligence can be broken down into two parts that will show how this one word is the product of different skills and characteristics. For a person to be diligent, they will first need to already be trying to accomplish something. This shows that they are adding value to their life by challenging themselves. Accomplishing something must be governed by rules, and this means the way to be diligent is to attempt to accomplish something carefully. It is not enough to try to accomplish, but rather to put regulations on one's self to make sure that the reward (of whatever it is trying to be acccomplished) is of true satisfaction. 
 When it comes to characteristics of people, being a diligent worker cannot be completely understood when taught by someone else. It is one of those rare traits that can only be taught by one's self when they realize that this is the way society wants people to be. Having a sense of pride from the effort  put in to the work will keep a person addicted to being at a certain standard in any work they do. From my experiences, there is no bigger pay off than to be rewarded for the carefully chosen work I have put in. Whether it is on school assignments, or general house labor, paying attention and being persistent will lead to success. There probability of long term success increases every time one puts their best efforts forward. Over time a raised expectation will turn in to a habit, and there is certainly nothing wrong with this habit.
          Other words that fall in the same category are industrious, assiduous, sedulous, indefatigable, untiring, tireless, and unremitting
. These all contain the central idea of working towards something, with a will from within. The complete opposites of being diligent are inactive, indifferent, languid, lazy, lethargic, and negligent. No one should want to be categorized as any of these because they are not positive, and will not do not lead to success. Seeing the opposite of what the word means will show what not to be, and for some, that is an easier way to comprehend why being diligent is appreciated. The history of the word helps understand the value of diligence in the past still directly ties to the way modern civilization views it today.It began in the thirteenth century as "diligentem", where it meant attentive, or assiduous(Dictionary.com). This is basically the same as the current definition.
“The hand of the diligent will rule, while the lazy will be put to forced labor.”-Author Unknown (Columbia World of Quotations). This quote has an easy concept to understand; anyone given a task should not stop trying to accomplish the challenges put before them, and  someday they will  become the creator of those challenges for others to work towards. The word, as well as the quote, apply directly to the quality of things done in school. At first,one spends a lot of time working all the way from elementary school to college. After combining all of the education they have gathered, they will get to choose what they want to be doing in life, rather than be forced to live a life unwanted  due to a lack of education. 
This word applies so well to my life, that it even describes the way I will have to work in my future career. My plan is to become an architect in life, and this requires a lot of skills combined. In fact, I believe it takes up all of the skills I have learned in life, and uses them to create unique works of large-scale art. Paying attention to detail is necessary to become successful in a project. In any given scenario, one must consider numerous things at the same time and keep moving forward to meet deadlines. New challenges are brought up constantly, and each one of those challenges adds up to create property for residential, commercial, and industrial property owners. There might not be a reward for attentiveness, but onlookers will appreciate that there are still people in this world who care about fine detail.
 
It is vital to be diligent in order to surpass the average, and go for advanced. I’ve found throughout my life that people usually appreciate diligent workers. Getting recognition for diligence is not nearly as important as staying at a level where everything you do is diligent work. I have found it necessary to apply this word to my life, because it has helped me in my past, and will be the reason for the success of my future.



 


BIBLIOGRAPHY

1. "Diligent | Define Diligent at Dictionary.com." Dictionary.com | Free Online Dictionary for English Definitions. Random House, Inc. 2011. Web. 04 Mar. 2011. <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/diligent>.
2. "The_hand_of_the_diligent_will_rule_while." Columbia World of Quotations. Columbia University Press, 1996. 03 Mar. 2011. <Dictionary.com http://quotes.dictionary.com/The_hand_of_the_diligent_will_rule_while >.
3."diligent." Online Etymology Dictionary. Douglas Harper, Historian. 24 Mar. 2011. <Dictionary.com http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/diligent>.
 

Friday, March 4, 2011

Definition Summary

Raul Martinez
Mrs.Boreson
Period 4
March 4, 2011
When given the opportunity to describe yourself with one word it is important to find the word that has brought you to where you currently are in life. “Diligent” is the word that I can relate the most to myself.
The online dictionary defines diligent as 1. constant in effort to accomplish something; attentive and persistent in doing anything. 2. Done or pursued with persevering attention (Dictionary.com). This definition agrees to the way that I understand the word. Diligence can be broken down into two parts that will show how this one word is the product of different skills and characteristics. For a person to be diligent, they will first need to already be trying to accomplish something. This shows that they are adding value to their life by challenging themselves. Accomplishing something must be governed by rules, and this means the way to be diligent is to attempt to accomplish something carefully. It is not enough to try to accomplish, but rather to put regulations on yourself to make sure that the reward (of whatever it is you are trying to accomplish) is of true satisfaction. 
When it comes to characteristics of people, being a diligent worker cannot be completely understood when taught by someone else. It is one of those rare traits that can only be taught by you when you realize that this is the way society wants people to be. Having a sense of pride from the effort you put in to your work will keep you addicted to being at a certain standard in any work you do. From my experiences, there is no bigger pay off than to be rewarded for the carefully chosen work you put in. Whether it is on school assignments, or general house labor, paying attention and being persistent will lead to success.

            Other words that fall in the same category are industrious, assiduous, sedulous, indefatigable, untiring, tireless, unremitting
. These all contain the central idea of working towards something, with a will from within. The complete opposites of being diligent are inactive, indifferent, languid, lazy, lethargic, and negligent. No one should want to be categorized as any of these because they are not positive and will not get you far. Seeing the opposite of what the word means will show what not to be, and for some, that is an easier way to comprehend why being diligent is appreciated.
“The hand of the diligent will rule, while the lazy will be put to forced labor.”-Author Unknown (Columbia World of Quotations). This quote has an easy concept to understand; do not stop trying to accomplish the challenges put before you, and you will someday be the creator of those challenges for others to work towards. You can apply the word, as well as the quote, to the way you have to be in school. At first you spend a lot of time working all the way from elementary school to college. After combining all of the education you’ve gathered you will get to choose what you want to do in life, rather than be forced to live a life you don’t want due to a lack of education. 
This word applies so well to my life that it even describes the way I will have to work in my future career. My plan is to become an architect in life, and this requires a lot of skills combined. In fact, I believe it takes up all of the skills I have learned in life, and uses them to create unique works of large-scale art. Paying attention to detail is necessary to become successful in a project. You have to consider numerous things at the same time and keep moving forward to meet deadlines. New challenges are brought to you constantly, and each one of those challenges adds up to create property for residential, commercial, and industrial property owners.
It is vital to be diligent in order to surpass the average, and go for advanced. I’ve found throughout my life that people usually appreciate diligent workers. Getting recognition for diligence is not nearly as important as staying at a level where everything you do is diligent work. I have found it necessary to apply this word to my life because it has helped me in my past and will be the reason for the success of my future.














BIBLIOGRAPHY

1. "Diligent | Define Diligent at Dictionary.com." Dictionary.com | Free Online Dictionary for English Definitions. Random House, Inc. 2011. Web. 04 Mar. 2011. <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/diligent>.
2. "The_hand_of_the_diligent_will_rule_while." Columbia World of Quotations. Columbia University Press, 1996. 03 Mar. 2011. <Dictionary.com http://quotes.dictionary.com/The_hand_of_the_diligent_will_rule_while >.

Monday, February 28, 2011

Thursday, February 10, 2011

3rd Letter for Recommendation

Raul Martinez Jr.
937 N. 7th Street
Johnstown, CO 80534
(970)-691-5679
8 February 2011

Mrs. Jennifer Boreson
English Department
Roosevelt High School
Johnstown, CO 80534
Dear Mrs. Boreson,
As my senior year comes to a close, I am planning on applying for a significant amount of scholarships. I would appreciate it greatly if you would write a recommendation letter for me that will show the general things that I have accomplished in my academic career. Because I have taken two classes from you here at Roosevelt, you know the quality of my academic work, as well as my qualities as a person.
As my instructor coach for speech and expository writing classes, you are familiar with my grades, work ethic, and study habits. I think you have a good sense of whether or not I should be eligible to receive financial aid. I have been able to maintain a 3.5 GPA, along with three semesters of perfect attendance. I have participated in the extra curricular activities of 1 year of football, 4 years of basketball, and 2 years of track. While participating in these I was able to work 13 months at Kentucky Fried Chicken.
Thank you for your help, I really appreciate you taking the time to write this letter for me. Let me know if you need any more information (rauleezy@hotmail.com ).

Sincerely,



Raul Martinez

Enclosure

2nd Letter for Recommendation

Raul Martinez Jr.
937 N. 7th Street
Johnstown, CO 80534
(970)-691-5679
8 February 2011

Mr. Matthew Ohlson    
Social Studies Department
Roosevelt High School
Johnstown, CO 80534
Dear Mr. Ohlson,
As my senior year comes to a close, I am planning on applying for a significant amount of scholarships. I would appreciate it greatly if you would write a recommendation letter for me that will show the general things that I have accomplished in my academic career. Because I have taken two classes from you here at Roosevelt, you know the quality of my academic work, as well as my qualities as a person.
As my basketball coach for two years, track coach for one year, and teacher for one year, you are familiar with my grades, work ethic, and quality of work. I think you have a good sense of whether or not I should be eligible to receive financial aid. I have been able to maintain a 3.5 GPA, along with three semesters of perfect attendance. I have participated in the extra curricular activities of 1 year of football, 4 years of basketball, and 2 years of track. While participating in these I was able to work 13 months at Kentucky Fried Chicken.
Thank you for your help, I really appreciate you taking the time to write this letter for me. Let me know if you need any more information (rauleezy@hotmail.com ).

Sincerely,



Raul Martinez

Enclosure

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Letter for Recommendation

937 N. 7th Street
Johnstown, CO 80534
(970)-691-5679
8 February 2011

Mr. Alan Gibson              
English Department
Roosevelt High School
Johnstown, CO 80534
Dear Mr. Gibson,
As my senior year comes to a close, I am planning on applying for a significant amount of scholarships. I would appreciate it greatly if you would write a recommendation letter for me that will show the general things that I have accomplished in my academic career. Because I have taken two classes from you here at Roosevelt, you know the quality of my academic work, as well as my qualities as a person.
As the facilitator for my broadcasting classes, you are familiar with my grades, work ethic, and quality of work. I think you have a good sense of whether or not I should be eligible to receive financial aid. I have been able to maintain a 3.5 GPA, along with three semesters of perfect attendance. I have participated in the extra curricular activities of 1 year of football, 4 years of basketball, and 2 years of track. While participating in these I was able to work 13 months at Kentucky Fried Chicken.
Thank you for your help, I really appreciate you taking the time to write this letter for me. Let me know if you need any more information (rauleezy@hotmail.com ).

Sincerely,



Raul Martinez

Enclosure

Friday, February 4, 2011

College Essay 1

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Submit an online short written response (250 words or less) for the question:
What would you say to someone who thinks education doesn't matter, or that college is a waste of time and money?

My immediate response to the opinion of a person who believes education doesn’t matter would be to have them look around. The way world economics are today, not only is it necessary to attend college, but it may very soon become critical. In order to live a lifestyle that we are accustomed to today, we have to move along with new standards so we can continue to live this way tomorrow. Prices for goods and services continue to rise, but the salaries for lower class jobs remain the same. If you do not move forward with the world, you’ll stay left behind possibly in poverty.
The value of an education is much more than a degree. It is an opportunity to live a fulfilling lifestyle, and bring along everyone that is close to you. It may take a lot of money now, but looking back it will be a fraction of what you can be earning with a college degree.